Tuesday, December 25, 2012

She Is My Dream Comments

Rating: 4.5

My day starts, with castles in the air
I sit at the mirror and do some prayer
I see some face not alien to me
I wonder if that's real me
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Kishor Pathak
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Hazel Durham 26 December 2012

A stunningly honest poem about your great love but she doesn't return your love. With amazing lines with no sign of bitterness! Outstanding write! !

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Payal Parande 25 December 2012

wow you really write this piece i am lost for words after reading this poem..this is out of this world...........

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Kishor Pathak

Kishor Pathak

Nagpur, Maharashtra, India
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