Wednesday, November 4, 2020

She Is Like A Desert Flower Comments

Rating: 4.8

She is like a desert flower
Belligerent for the survival
Cruel weather gives no respite
Fierce battle alone fights.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mihaela Pirjol 15 November 2020

The distinguished attributes of rarity...the invisible plenitude of roots...wonderfully written...

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Zuzu Mutairi 08 November 2020

Games of life for otherwise and within the norms of society

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T Rajan Evol 08 November 2020

Superb comparison. Well written

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Shreya Hacks 07 November 2020

A life sketch of fairer nicely compared with desert flowers...

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 November 2020

In nature The desert flowers Are most beautiful. This poem also

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Zuzu Mutairi 07 November 2020

Nice description of women's life She is like a desert flower Belligerent for the survival Cruel weather gives no respite Fierce battle alone fights.

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Valsa George 06 November 2020

There are some who fight all odds of life with determination! She is one like that! The comparison to a desert flower here is very apt for her! She survives even amid hostile surroundings! A well composed poem!

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Deepak S S 06 November 2020

Fierce battle and lone fight....very good description of life.

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Poetic Sky 06 November 2020

Well written From dawn to the dusk She waits for the rain Clouds appear and turns again Inside her colossal eyes the void remains.

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Anjandev Roy 06 November 2020

......the void remains........brilliant.......thank u, dear friend......anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2020

From dawn to the dusk She waits for the rain Clouds appear and turns again Inside her colossal eyes the void remains....touching expression with outstanding concept. Beautiful poem related to love and philosophy. I appreciate the way of presentation. Full stars.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 November 2020

the desert flower is beautiful also but for the dryness the heart feels voidness and the forlorn beauty feels emptiness everywhere when stays loveless!

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Kostas Lagos 05 November 2020

Great poem! A woman of patience and strength with a bit of dissapointment lurking inside.

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 November 2020

In her struggles lies her strength. What a beautiful poem Asim. A beautiful tribute to the battles of life 10*****

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Gordon Walter 04 November 2020

Hope keeping her alive like desert flowers.5*

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Varsha M 04 November 2020

Very true words. Well written. Void remains. True. Thank-you.sir.

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