Wednesday, September 17, 2008

She Is Gone Comments

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i tried to get over the fact that she is gone but i am not strong.i tried writing a song but realised that i was wrong the healing will take
long.she was my sky the fact that she's gone make me want
to cry oh so hard i try...try not to cry, try to convince myself
that it will be alright but she took away the light i can't
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andile panda
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Kholekile Monakali 28 September 2008

you cannot take back the water that is spilled down olny what you can do is to accept...nic poem boy keep it up.............! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Egi David Perdana 26 September 2008

you're youngest talent welcome!

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Bantu Ngcephe 17 September 2008

Andile that is a very powerful poem man, i'm insipered..good stuff keep wrintin

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andile panda

south africa, cape town
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