Wednesday, July 27, 2016

She Is Changed In Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ignorant lover is insane in love,
looking for beloved, who is no more!
She is changed in beauty and scattered,
on the skies and beyond the skies.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 31 July 2016

A passionate and electrically charged poem..... Enjoyed! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2016

Beautiful write. Beauty in everything you see. Loved the concept.

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Hazel Durham 28 July 2016

Wow! Outstanding write! With such beautiful imagery that sets the tone and spirit of creative energy released with the force of nature like all the emotions and passion of being in love!

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Kelly Kurt 28 July 2016

A moving and sensual depiction of the power of love and a kiss

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