Sunday, February 28, 2021

She Is Alone With Her Thoughts. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the breeze carries tenderness
How can someone remain aloof?
By the caring, soft touches
On the milky ways of life ~
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M. Asim Nehal
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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 March 2021

I loved it. Its deep, but not in that senses.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 March 2021

A cleverest poem about a female person, surrounded by all kind of magic and wonders on the milky ways of life. In silence she is alone with her thoughts, a very logic conclusion, dear Asim Sir! Most loveliest presented.5 Stars!

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Darren Jkoeryo 01 March 2021

DJ liked this expressive poem

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Deepak S S 01 March 2021

Superb. The limitations between the sunrise and the sunset.

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Hamster Drill 01 March 2021

Yet another perfect poem.

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Mamta 01 March 2021

Such a wonderful poem, you explored true beauty of a women.

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Varsha M 28 February 2021

Sir this is really beautiful. Indeed st zenith, in her silence, no more fear but still pouring care. Lovely poem sir.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 28 February 2021

Superb expression! ! ! !

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