She Is Afraid, He Is Tired.. Comments

You've given the reader food for thought pertaining to lost love. Your words weigh heavy on the heart. Thanks for posting.

What a beauty! Enjoyed the re

Lost love makes heart ache…

Just love it. A masterpiece of great creatively

A great poem! My pleasure reading this magnificent piece of work time and again!

all your poems are unique and different, poetic style and new feeling covering your language and images, that is the the meaning of creativity, look like you live poetic life too, congratulation and wish you all the best..10/10 from me...regards

Nicely written piece and your wording was great. I enjoyed this..! ! hey i'm write as well so please check my site 2 :)

Over shadows love, swept out black coals. Your smile, twin lips. He kissed, both miss.........//// it's beautiful poem// FAV one also

.......A lovely poem!

A very intricate structured poem. Great flow and passionate.

Well articulated and nicely penned with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, James.

A very Owner ful poem on life and love, thank you. Panagiota Romios

Beautiful play on words.I enjoyed it keep them coming

What a beautiful poem I have cold chills and this is one of my favorite reads Ty Dawn

A lovely poem! Appreciate the apt use of metaphor......Thanks for sharing....10

I love the use of coal as a metaphor.

i like burned ice cold heart oops! i meant burned ice cold hot! ! ! Your smile, twin lips. He kissed, both miss..................this gave me a little laugh. i hope that is ok with you! ! ! :) bri

Is it poetry, I loved it! This really spoke in a succinct way of the the love so strong even in loss and time gone. Even when challenged by distance. Memory is our true scrapbook where we go to remember and embrace our precious lives with those we have loved and have loved us. You made your point in a very creative run of consciousness fashion; I found it quite refreshing and fun! . Blessings Kathy

From the coals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Amazing poem. I see here a romantic relationship on the verge of disintegration. Great narrative. Your smile, twin lips. He kissed, both miss.