Monday, October 27, 2014

She Is A Woman.. Comments

Rating: 4.7

Don't hold her tight
For she will explode..
Not too loose
For she will fly..
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Kyvin Nash 16 November 2018

Hi Ging This is a perfect description of a woman, I love the 1st Stanza, and last line there I conclude brings the picture of a women giving a man a tip how to love a woman and the 4th Stanza is more of a warning. Gather all your faults.. She remembers.. +10

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Bri Edwards 28 May 2017

maybe you mean mellow-dramas = dramas which are mellow, but i'd use melodramas; i checked the spelling. :) i don't know why it is spelled that way. i wish this were shorter so i 'could' use it in my/our June showcase. i really like it. i'd offer my man-strength, but i'm married : (. behalf.............maybe you are referring to one's better half? ? bet·ter half noun informal noun: better half; plural noun: better halves a person's wife, husband, or partner. bri :) to MyPoemList if it is not yet there.

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Bri Edwards 27 April 2017

SO MANY COMMENTS! i don't know if i have one among them. overall, i like it. so, it is now very clear to all why living with a woman, whether one is another woman or a man, can be tough on both! i should know: 4 wives! at least they were ONE AT A TIME! men, OF COURSE, are perfect beings and will bother no one. ha ha. bri :)

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Akhtar Jawad 22 March 2017

A beautiful poem in that a woman is defining a woman, a well deserved selection as members' poem of the day, congrats.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 March 2017

Beautiful poem. You have depicted a beautiful picture of woman. Congrats on member poem of the day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 March 2017

'She needs a MAN who stands by her. To love her... To laugh with, to talk with... Who believes in her will Her source of strength.. Her behalf.. ' a beautiful rendition on strength and weakness of a woman. Very beautiful. Style is awesome.

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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2017

Your depiction of a woman is quite truthful and very rich in content. Focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing.

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Christina Simmons 22 March 2017

Such a joy reading this poem. So well written. You penned it very well! It really made my day. Congratulation! ! !

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Bharati Nayak 22 March 2017

I am reading this poem again after almost two years and immediately recognized it.A deserving poem to get selected for Poem of the Day. Congratulations Ging Taping.

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Tom Allport 22 March 2017

a poem that tells the inner and outer feelings of a woman, .........superbly written.

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Daniel Jones 22 March 2017

Congratulations, what a wonderful poem. just beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 March 2017

Source of strength.... congrats on being chosen....

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Sylvaonyema Uba 22 March 2017

A good expression on womanhood. Nicely expressed. Sylva

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 22 March 2017

Whether all of them are in a single character is a different question, yet, that is the ideal woman, if one can find. She is strong, but she is vulnerable, weak and fragile......... This says everything. Great stuff, brilliantly expressed. Please read my Matchless She as well. Congrats for being the member's PoD.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2017

Love her gently! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 March 2017

Heartiest Congrats on selection of this beautifully conceived meaningful and thought provoking poem as the member poem of the day.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 13 November 2016

She needs a MAN who stands by her. To love her... To laugh with, to talk with... Who believes in her will Her source of strength.. Her behalf.. So lovely and so touching. It's an excellent work.10

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 28 September 2016

Beautiful advice! I am glad to hear that from a woman. A woman is like a wandering pigeon.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 13 September 2016

a wife must fit all u say. then he is fortunate

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Ging Taping 13 September 2016

thanks Sir hope He feels fortunate and not taking Her for granted..thank you again

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Unknown Spirit 12 September 2016

you explained deepest and immaculate feelings and expectations of women in a very innovative and genius way. sense of sympathy, attention and caring and also feeling of being important for someone is the most pleasant mood of all time. some do not dare to metamorphasize theses feeling to magic words but you did with such exceptional bravery. i really like your poems. thanks dear Going Taping. mohammad.

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