Don't hold her tight
For she will explode..
Not too loose
For she will fly..
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maybe you mean mellow-dramas = dramas which are mellow, but i'd use melodramas; i checked the spelling. :) i don't know why it is spelled that way. i wish this were shorter so i 'could' use it in my/our June showcase. i really like it. i'd offer my man-strength, but i'm married : (. behalf.............maybe you are referring to one's better half? ? bet·ter half noun informal noun: better half; plural noun: better halves a person's wife, husband, or partner. bri :) to MyPoemList if it is not yet there.
SO MANY COMMENTS! i don't know if i have one among them. overall, i like it. so, it is now very clear to all why living with a woman, whether one is another woman or a man, can be tough on both! i should know: 4 wives! at least they were ONE AT A TIME! men, OF COURSE, are perfect beings and will bother no one. ha ha. bri :)
A beautiful poem in that a woman is defining a woman, a well deserved selection as members' poem of the day, congrats.
Beautiful poem. You have depicted a beautiful picture of woman. Congrats on member poem of the day.
'She needs a MAN who stands by her. To love her... To laugh with, to talk with... Who believes in her will Her source of strength.. Her behalf.. ' a beautiful rendition on strength and weakness of a woman. Very beautiful. Style is awesome.
Your depiction of a woman is quite truthful and very rich in content. Focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing.
Such a joy reading this poem. So well written. You penned it very well! It really made my day. Congratulation! ! !
I am reading this poem again after almost two years and immediately recognized it.A deserving poem to get selected for Poem of the Day. Congratulations Ging Taping.
a poem that tells the inner and outer feelings of a woman, .........superbly written.
Congratulations, what a wonderful poem. just beautifully expressed. Thank you.
Whether all of them are in a single character is a different question, yet, that is the ideal woman, if one can find. She is strong, but she is vulnerable, weak and fragile......... This says everything. Great stuff, brilliantly expressed. Please read my Matchless She as well. Congrats for being the member's PoD.
Heartiest Congrats on selection of this beautifully conceived meaningful and thought provoking poem as the member poem of the day.
She needs a MAN who stands by her. To love her... To laugh with, to talk with... Who believes in her will Her source of strength.. Her behalf.. So lovely and so touching. It's an excellent work.10
Beautiful advice! I am glad to hear that from a woman. A woman is like a wandering pigeon.
thanks Sir hope He feels fortunate and not taking Her for granted..thank you again
you explained deepest and immaculate feelings and expectations of women in a very innovative and genius way. sense of sympathy, attention and caring and also feeling of being important for someone is the most pleasant mood of all time. some do not dare to metamorphasize theses feeling to magic words but you did with such exceptional bravery. i really like your poems. thanks dear Going Taping. mohammad.
Hi Ging This is a perfect description of a woman, I love the 1st Stanza, and last line there I conclude brings the picture of a women giving a man a tip how to love a woman and the 4th Stanza is more of a warning. Gather all your faults.. She remembers.. +10