Saturday, March 23, 2019

She Is A Delightful Self: Comments

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: she is a delightful self:

With red saree brown border
She walks as moon
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Prabir Gayen
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Jankovic Zoran 05 April 2019

The full song about the most important thing in the world MATE SOUL. Keep it.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 March 2019

Domestic works on her part she does as feast of colour, She is a part of gleaming drop, The soul of my Soul, The vibration of my consciousness, A moon in disjunct hut.........Mesmerizing, you conjured Magic here, poet! Thank you for the Beauty in your soul

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 March 2019

She sheds beauteous form, Her eyelid gaze shadows numberless dreams, It does awake a revered stillness that reflects the moon with full glory, .......................................Absolute tremendous! Loveliest worded, dear poet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 March 2019

: she is a delightful self: With red saree brown border She walks as moon climbs the heaven, Mystic coyness among unfamiliar dignities, ...........................Most Beautifully worded, touching poem, excellent dear poet!

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 March 2019

She is a part of gleaming drop, The soul of my Soul, The vibration of my consciousness, beautiful, simply beautiful are your verses. tony

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 March 2019

''The vibration of my consciousness, '' - What better way to define one's soul-mate? - This must be the very definition of it!

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Prosanta Mondal 24 March 2019

Domestic works on her part she does as feast of colour, She is a part of gleaming drop, The soul of my Soul, The vibration of my consciousness, A moon in disjunct hut. ......fine poem

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Srijan Mondal 24 March 2019

She is a part of gleaming drop, The soul of my Soul, The vibration of my consciousness, A moon in disjunct hut... ..........fine

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 March 2019

She! ! ! ! Your glory. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 23 March 2019

" she walks as moon climbes the heaven." - a beautiful conciet. i get something vivid and mysterious of high level whenever i read you, sir. please read my new poem my lilac tree.

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Julia Luber 23 March 2019

A moon is disjunct hut: quirky and fascinating sense of objects and symbolism

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