James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Monday, May 25, 2009

She Is Comments

Rating: 4.9

Like a bird to see her sitting, roses are
of passions dream, in sight her flight.
Butterfly's know her grace, touches many
all, weeping softly, others without, it is sadly.
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James McLain
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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

wonderful simile: ''like a bird to see her sitting, roses are of passions dream, in sight her flight.'' well written poem..10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 June 2009

Love this composition.

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 June 2009

Is it poetry? ...hey this is poetry indeed...great words nice beautiful words..liked them very much..great sir..A+++

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. . 05 June 2009

So many are your prose but this scent caught my nose. How beautiful is she to me that even an old 'Goth' can see! :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 June 2009

beautiful... lots of beautiful pictures lovely descriptions 10++ maia

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Ashleymarie love 27 May 2009

beautiful Ashleymarie

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Elizabeth Resendiz 26 May 2009

its really beautiful

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a truly beautiful poem poetry..well done 10+++

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Carol Gall 25 May 2009

words that weave a picture 10

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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