Wednesday, July 30, 2014

She In Desert Comments

Rating: 5.0

A day in desert with a lovely woman,
May I describe it, yes, I think I can.
Her long brownish hair is spread at night,
Moon and stars are the sources of light.
...
Read full text

Akhtar Jawad
COMMENTS
Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 August 2019

Her lips like petals of a lovely rose, The style of sleeping in a sexy pose, The landscape is same as at home, As if she's sleeping under same old dome. old is gold sir

0 0 Reply
Khalida Bano Ali 21 October 2014

A beautiful and lovely poem.

1 0 Reply
Ramesh Rai 26 September 2014

What a beautiful write enchanted my soul. Thanks for sharing/ Regrds.

1 0 Reply
Ramesh Rai 26 September 2014

What a beautiful write enchanted my soul. Thanks for sharing/ Regrds.

1 0 Reply
Rafique Farooqi 03 August 2014

Beautifully penned poem..................

1 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2014

Beauty lies in the eyes of poet. With his beautiful imagery he portrayed a woman, carved a beauty out of it, with his wonderful words. if the desert could look so beautiful and could arise inside many unseen storms. Ganges or Ravi or Sindh have huts, Have beauty of movement in the lovely cuts. What else I get is fruitless and futile, I don't need pyramids of the Nile.... It's the beauty of words which made her look so beautiful and captivating to ones eyes. Loved the way you presented it.

1 0 Reply
Soulful Heart 31 July 2014

source of peace and joy or rather the sustain er of beauty and affection.........woman indeed.............sounds good to hear from a man..................thnx for acknowledging the essence...........

1 0 Reply
Neela Nath Das 30 July 2014

An exotic beauty she is! Love is the pure source of peace.There is a contrast between the cool beauty and the hot desert.Loved.

1 0 Reply
Savita Tyagi 30 July 2014

A lovely poem. A night in desert is indeed full of beauty and mystical charm. Enjoyed this poem with all its rhythm and rhyme as well as it's message of love and peace.

1 0 Reply
Valsa George 30 July 2014

The barreness of the never ending stretch of sands is amply compensated by her enticing beauty and charm. As we read the poem, her charm unfolds slowly one by one and one gets the feeling of swimming in the river of her beauty! Enjoyed much!

1 0 Reply
Salini Nair 30 July 2014

beautiful nature poem sir, like it

1 0 Reply
Gajanan Mishra 30 July 2014

love is purpose of life, good writing, thanks,

1 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

Gorakhpur
Close
Error Success