Thursday, December 3, 2015

She Hates Her Laughter [ The Little Refugeegirl ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ikon of that little face
always present asleep or awake.
The one hand stretched out to grasp,
the other beating, kicking waters back.
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Margaret O Driscoll 24 February 2016

So very sad, such pain and suffering, thanks for sharing Dimitios

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Dimitrios Galanis 25 February 2016

Thank you, dear Lady, for having a kind word about the feelings the poem can cause.

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Pamela Sinicrope 26 January 2016

A dramatic poem that illustrates the pain, loss, and suffering experienced by refugees. So sad with lasting lingering effects on the human psyche.

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Dimitrios Galanis 26 January 2016

Very pleased to see you, Pamela, have a flettering word on it.Thank you.

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Galina Italyanskaya 23 January 2016

A very impressive writing! After loosing family and friends how to laugh?

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Dimitrios Galanis 23 January 2016

Thank you, Galina.I do appreciate so much your generous word, having noticed in many of your comments on poems in PH, the ability to utter a serious literary critic.Take into notice that english is not my native language and my translations into english from the prototyp is not an easy one.Do please without any hasitation let me know the expression not appropriate to change.Thanks again

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Tim Wilds 07 December 2015

What powerful imagery! Tense. I could picture every line of it. She feels a knot clogging the throat Sob strange comes often out as breath. Those lines really stand out to me. I can relate to the intense sadness, but can't begin to imagine what they went through. You captured the scenery, emotion, and the human spirit in this one Dimitrios. Thank you for sharing.

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Dimitrios Galanis 07 December 2015

It; s an honour to you to have seen it the way described.Do study its means to emphasise the trauma of a child, who shows the humanism the responsible should show

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