Monday, February 18, 2013

She Has Gone Now Comments

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She has gone now, lost to dreaming
High above the vapoured clouds -
As a wispy phantom drifting;
Wrapped within enfolded shrouds
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Valerie Dohren
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Danny Draper 13 March 2013

And what a song in waiting sung and in each word an enduring meliferous note that shall hold its place and beckon her til by her volition she is returned with grace. A lovely poem, thank you Valerie.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 08 March 2013

Wonderful piece of writing.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 05 March 2013

Absolutely beautiful...A heart tender! Love the sentiment!

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Unwritten Soul 02 March 2013

Val, your tone always soft and enticing! beautiful and it really amazing...she has gone but your muse is always exist _Soul

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Dee Corpolongo 28 February 2013

Oh, such amazing beauty....put together into words...Excellentl, Val. Beautiful flow and soft rhythm filled with grace and beauty abound.

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John Brown 24 February 2013

Beautiful poem Val - simple as that.

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Owain Glyn 23 February 2013

As usual a very clever write1

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 February 2013

Every poet experiences this flight of Muse now and then! She is very much with you now, else you couldn't have written this grand poem! !

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Neela Nath Das 21 February 2013

So melodious it is. The ray of optimism is peeping wonderfully.Hats off dear Val.

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Valsa said it right... She is vey much within you Valerie. This optimism sounds good and you belong to a world desirable for all with such soft thoughts

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Valsa George 20 February 2013

She is around you, nay, very much within you! A lovely poem! !

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Terry M 20 February 2013

Bravo.............well done, I do hope you keep up the good work!

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Kelvin Owusu 20 February 2013

beautifully written i loved it

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Lyn Paul 20 February 2013

Written beautifully, very touching.

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Heather Wilson 19 February 2013

A sweet poem touched with sadness, keep singing Val.

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Dave Walker 18 February 2013

A very beautiful muse. It would sound really good With the piano.

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Savita Tyagi 18 February 2013

Lovely poem. So often I feel the same sentiments. Coming of her is something to be celebrated and she will be back!

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