She has gone now, lost to dreaming
High above the vapoured clouds -
As a wispy phantom drifting;
Wrapped within enfolded shrouds
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Absolutely beautiful...A heart tender! Love the sentiment!
Val, your tone always soft and enticing! beautiful and it really amazing...she has gone but your muse is always exist _Soul
Oh, such amazing beauty....put together into words...Excellentl, Val. Beautiful flow and soft rhythm filled with grace and beauty abound.
Every poet experiences this flight of Muse now and then! She is very much with you now, else you couldn't have written this grand poem! !
So melodious it is. The ray of optimism is peeping wonderfully.Hats off dear Val.
Valsa said it right... She is vey much within you Valerie. This optimism sounds good and you belong to a world desirable for all with such soft thoughts
She is around you, nay, very much within you! A lovely poem! !
Bravo.............well done, I do hope you keep up the good work!
A very beautiful muse. It would sound really good With the piano.
Lovely poem. So often I feel the same sentiments. Coming of her is something to be celebrated and she will be back!
And what a song in waiting sung and in each word an enduring meliferous note that shall hold its place and beckon her til by her volition she is returned with grace. A lovely poem, thank you Valerie.