Friday, April 27, 2007

She Gives Off Light As She Walks. Comments

Rating: 5.0

'On the day when a woman as she passes before you
emits light as she walks, you are lost, you love.
But one thing remains for you to do:
to think of her so intently
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William Jackson
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If it had worked, that love would be not be long nor good for you... A fine piece of work here, Bill...like the tight cropt structure... I detect a smatter of the abstract, and it works nicely.... FjR.

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William Jackson

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