Friday, August 23, 2013

She Ditched Me Comments

Rating: 3.3

For the first time in my life
I fell in love with a girl
She said she’d always be by my side
Whenever I needed her
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Dipy Hermonite
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Ajit Chaliha 20 November 2013

Love is music, created by lovers with various instruments. When you do not tune these instruments frequently, the music turn to just noise. Try bringing back to tune the instruments of love.

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Soumita Sarkar 04 October 2013

one person can never decide upon anybody's life.....good write...this should be a past dream.

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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

love has its weakness same as strength. a strong love will survive a weak one will not. best to find out up front a good write

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Patricia Grantham 23 August 2013

To love and lost is better not to be loved at all. A potent write that we all can relate to at one time or another. We can get up shake off the dust and keep moving. Love will come again whenever and wherever. Please read my poem Love Seesaw. Enjoyed this write.

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Gajanan Mishra 23 August 2013

good write, thanks, I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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