Monday, May 29, 2006

~she Died Right There Before Me~ Comments

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To me, she could've said anything
I wanted so badly to hear her say,
''I love you and I'm gonna try.''
But all she said is ''I just can't stay.''
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Mary Nagy
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Lee Degnan 05 November 2006

That was a nasty twist for me towards the end there when you said 'she drove away...' WOW... this one really got to me... you are awesome! ~Lee

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Nalini Hebbar 07 July 2006

this one is just too good for me to even try comment about...you are the best on PH...and i mean that...love...nalini

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Ernestine Northover 30 May 2006

A very poignant write Mary. Meaningful and sad too. Love Ernestine XXX

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A RIVETING PIECE OF WORK....AND A MOST WRENCHING ORDEAL TO MAKE SENSE OF...WELL AS THE GOOD BOOK TELLS US ALL...WE REAP WHAT WE SOW...AND THATS WHY YOU ARE HERE W/ US RIGHT HERE & NOW, MARY NAGY...& REAPING& SOWING SWEET POEMS OF TREASURE THAT SO GENEROUSLYLY SHARES YOUR LIFE WITH OTHERS...SPLENDID WRITE...SOLID CRAFTSMANSHIP, MARY...YOU HAVE ''THE GIFT OF THE SILENT WORD'', MOST ASSUREDLY! ...........'''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Dee Daffodil 29 May 2006

Mary....Have you read The Silent Visitor yet? You did a lovely job on this poem! Hugs, Dee

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***** ********* 29 May 2006

I feel for you Mary, but you will face her with the strength that her lousy upbringing gave you. Think about it. Tai

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