She Died Right There Before Me Comments

Wow, Mary, interesting twist on the title and an amazingly powerful write. Brian

Sometimes the ones you love don't have to drive away to die, sometimes it takes years to shed. Sometimes they just walk around and you pretend they're alive, when they're really the walking dead. Emotion in this was remarkable. Loved it. - K.

Such a brave and original poem deserves the same compliment, but I also want you to know that this gave me goosebumps, even though I'm not the first to say so. Thank you for your courage with words that must be terribly difficult to string together.

So now I've travelled the world of all you poems and it's been a revealing and rewarding journey. Thank you so much

Self preservation - sometimes we have to walk away. Isn't it interesting that, just when the wounds have started to heal, they come back to open them again. avr

Reading this gave me goosebumps and that doesn't happen with many poems I read...

My mom was defeated by my step father, i was young and couldnt help... To top things off she died of cancer, ......the point im making is if thiers hope, then take it........