Tuesday, August 21, 2012

She Dances Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

The blades, they cut, rip at her soles
The blackened shards, put there by your hand, maybe her own
But she'll smile, it's already a lesson learnt- she dances alone,
Upon your jewelled throne, you sit and condone
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Francisca Darko
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Adeline Foster 06 February 2016

It promises to be quite a story, I'm sure to watch for it. Read mine - We the Unencumbered - Adeline there is no such word as learnt, by the way, the word is learned.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 September 2012

A pensive poem but written in a fascinatin way dat ought to make d culprit feel highly remorseful.

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Elena Sandu 17 September 2012

Raw pain, heart filled with emotion, tears filled my eyes. Wonderful write, may you be healed to dance again not only in a pair but in most perfect syncron with the whole universe!

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Renee Marie 03 September 2012

Really touching. Felt like I was reading about a rape, incest, etc...

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