Thursday, September 4, 2014

She Dances Comments

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She dances
A little timid, a little shy
Such beauty and grace
Before the world's eye
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Joshua Fegley
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Roseann Shawiak 16 June 2016

This poem is fabulous! It's like you have described me to a tee, because it's how I feel when dancing! Really great rhythm and articulation throughout this poem, absolutely loved it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Soulful Heart 17 October 2014

echoes my feelings..

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 September 2014

A reader pulse also dancing with the words to grab the rhythm of its movement. Nice write.

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