Wednesday, February 22, 2012

She Danced Like Wolf Comments

Rating: 3.3

She danced like wolf,
Her eyes rocked his mind.
Waist gave an Invitation.
I lost my Love!
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Neela Nath Das
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Chuy Amante 11 July 2014

Oh my Neela! This one is steamy! Very nice! Have you retired to nature writing now?

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Sekharan Pookkat 03 July 2014

vow- exact word choice- I remained in a corner as a wingless dove- reveals the psychological aspect - it burns the heart of the reader- this poem needs more studies

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Roong S 13 June 2012

Very touching indeed..u know the exact words to use..well done! !

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