Tuesday, January 15, 2019

She'd Had Enough (A Limerick) Comments

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There was a young woman named Fran
Who'd married a violent man
After work, every night
He'd pound her to a fright
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Savita Tyagi 22 January 2019

So glad the woman decided to take the action. The limericks are a very fun way of recounting ugly happenings. written so well.

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Practicing Poetess 22 January 2019

Thank you very much, Savita, for taking the time to read my limerick!

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Christa D 20 January 2019

The limerick is well-written although the story is sad. Nice writing! ! !

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Practicing Poetess 21 January 2019

Thank you, Christa, to our newest shining star on Poem Hunter! : -)

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Tom Allport 19 January 2019

A sad write of a woman's plight but at least it had a happy ending? Well penned PP

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Practicing Poetess 19 January 2019

Thank you, Tom! Hoping the New Year has been treating you well!

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Ha ha nice one but after reading your note I feel sorry for Fran...Nice limerick.

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Practicing Poetess 16 January 2019

Thanks, Mohammed. Apparently Fran's hubby was a bully who didn't play fair. He could dish it out, but he couldn't take it.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 January 2019

chaotic and quarrelsome (loveless) conjugal life! /// nice limerick

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Practicing Poetess 16 January 2019

Definitely NOT a match made in Heaven, Mahtab! : -)

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Kostas Lagos 16 January 2019

A frying pan can be a solution for cooking and defending oneself....Nice poem!

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Practicing Poetess 16 January 2019

Yes, Kostas, it seems that a frying pan can serve a duel purpose, one beiong that of a weapon. I loved the Disney Pixar film 'TANGLED', and Rapunzel made use of her frying pan throughout the movie to smack Flynn Rider and her enemies upside the noggin!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 January 2019

A touching experience has been revealed through a beautiful as well as equally meaningful limerick. Thanks for sharing.10

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Practicing Poetess 16 January 2019

Thanks for reading, Ratnakar!

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