Tuesday, August 30, 2011

She Cries Comments

Rating: 4.7

She chooses to cry for she cannot contain
Every hurt inside and all the pain
She runs to cry when she needs help
To unburden the tears her smile can't keep
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Stephen Holland 10 February 2012

Love this poem! If more poeple showed their true emotions the wolrd would be a better place

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Mariz Manangan 22 September 2011

i was touched by this poem...

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Jhanessa Aiden 13 September 2011

Wow...this is so amazing... I really felt the emotional level of the scene...I would really love reading more of this...: D this is so me... Thank you Naida!

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Unwritten Soul 11 September 2011

I agree with Stefanie, so lyrical and beautiful....'She' must be cry when write or read something like this coz this just deeply good and emotional expressed :) _Unwritten Soul

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Stefanie Fontker 09 September 2011

Very emotional and lyrical, I like this. Well written and beautifully expressed.

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Ency Bearis 06 September 2011

wonderful thoughts well versed of how to burst out fire on the chest - and thru crying sometimes relieved such pain - great piece

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Joseph Juarez 04 September 2011

all people are in need of a good cry it helps... nice poem

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Dave Walker 04 September 2011

Very good poem about an emotion that People try to hide. You choose your words Well.

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Jim Troy 03 September 2011

A particle of life on this world that is self healing and the real deal for sure You tell it so well and I can't help but choke up just a tiny bit... For crying is something deeply shared with those who observe also. It is highly contagious. It's the first poem I have seen about the subject. Way to go my friend. Jim Troy

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Inner Whispers 02 September 2011

savor the sweetness of crying...

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Mary Lolly Florence Occenola 02 September 2011

OMG! this beautiful art of yours simply describes me and how i am these days..Gosh! hahaha I think it speaks for all women as well..i really like this poem.. it's like a tribute..: D you don't know how you much you inspire me now Ate :) thank you.10+

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Ency Bearis 31 August 2011

lovely poem the essence is great and make sense

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 August 2011

crying is better, better by far Than any means of mending a scar Amazing lines...ever wondered the explanations with such deep significance in the real life...well done.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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