Awful! she said
in this “awful”
I could feel quivering hands
On my chest as if fumbling
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very entharlling as most of your peices are.....a flustered mind entangled in the desperate act of fulfilling unjust desires? ? ?
awesome its so deep and yet almost candid all things good...go their way surmise....bemoan...invent..... yet to each a measure lurks great poetry cheers an ten
a very clear feeling and image presented in your passionated poem..10++++
coldplay... tidal wave... outer space... sadness... love... poetry... life... ah... goes a bit beyond the fourth dimension...
very enthralling as most of your pieces...