Thursday, June 11, 2009

She Condoled Comments

Rating: 5.0

Awful! she said
in this “awful”
I could feel quivering hands
On my chest as if fumbling
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Rehan Hyder
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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

very enthralling as most of your pieces...

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

very entharlling as most of your peices are.....a flustered mind entangled in the desperate act of fulfilling unjust desires? ? ?

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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2009

awesome its so deep and yet almost candid all things good...go their way surmise....bemoan...invent..... yet to each a measure lurks great poetry cheers an ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 June 2009

Beautiful poem

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a very clear feeling and image presented in your passionated poem..10++++

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Aamnah Akhtar 11 June 2009

coldplay... tidal wave... outer space... sadness... love... poetry... life... ah... goes a bit beyond the fourth dimension...

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