She Can’t See That Is Killing Me Comments

The words in your poem have so much meaning and the rhymes are very nice..10

very much impressived lines actually to holding the total pain is a pleasure, she can`t see that is how vexatious, great write thanks,10++

Such a poignant poem woven with great poetic language...10

so sad dear hope you get better one keep writing dear........

Very sad, but nicely penned... Keep it up Yasser

hmmm, nice poem..............

This is very sad Yasser, but it is good to bring out and write down what you are feeling deep inside, it is the best of your work..... Good luck and God bless you....10 Hataw