No more love after her love
Now she is gone ….eternally
Her pride with her heresy
She can’t see, that is killing me
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very much impressived lines actually to holding the total pain is a pleasure, she can`t see that is how vexatious, great write thanks,10++
so sad dear hope you get better one keep writing dear........
This is very sad Yasser, but it is good to bring out and write down what you are feeling deep inside, it is the best of your work..... Good luck and God bless you....10 Hataw
The words in your poem have so much meaning and the rhymes are very nice..10