Tuesday, September 26, 2006

She Can'T Say Why Comments

Rating: 4.5

she cant' say why she wont remove
the veils from her face,
the manacles around her wrists,
the ribbons and the lace,
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Joseph Daly 26 September 2006

There is a strong personal feel to the narrative. I like this very much and enjoy the rhyme that gives the poem a follow-on-through feel.

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bemidji, minnesota
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