She Can Make Me Go Astray! Comments
So many years of hardship
So many nights of lost sleep
So many days of heart-thief
So many tears of love's grief
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this is a very unique poem in all iuts aspects i just simply love it good job and keep writing, love, Tin Mouse
Pararhyme hardship/sleep interesting. Lines eight and nine strained, almost funny which I don't believe was your intention probably rhyming faces with places.
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8/7/2025 7:47:52 AM # 1.0.0
Keep writing..... Simple easy to understand