Sunday, July 19, 2009

She Came To Capture His Glory Comments

Rating: 4.5

Her tall figure graced the skyline
Of the ridge, slender in its fine
Afrikaans heritage, her head held downwards
Against the force of the wind, pushing forwards
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Tim Caton
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Prakash Mehra 05 November 2009

very deep thoughts/nice work.

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tom mc quade 13 September 2009

....this poem is a beautiful narrative..i stand alongside the woman on the cliff not with a camera but with my easel (im a artist) and choose to depict Nature's simple unadorned shrine as the more serious and lasting impression of place and time...good job tim! :) tom

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Kerry O'Connor 25 August 2009

I'm interested to note your reference to an Afrikaans heritage. This is a strong character-based description. Very thought-provoking.

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Tim Caton

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