She Came In My Arms Comments

In lovely wet night. Thanks for sharing.

a candidly lovely poem!

i like your 'bio' and i like the poet's note. after reading the poet note, i don't know if it would be appropriate to suggests that you 'should have used the word into instead of in. i WAS going to suggest that. BUT when you mentioned how young you two were, that it was early in the marriage, and that it was a night of...conjugal life, i decided that you really meant She came in my arms...................as in: English definition of “come” come verb [I] (SEX) /k?m/ (came, come) › to have an orgasm i'm not joking. thanks for sharing. i've got to go visit with my wife downstairs now. bri ;)

well done, good work, I like the imagery. A solid poem!

wonderful description, fine, I am thankful.

A fine work of art. A beautiful poem.