Friday, September 14, 2018

She Came Dancing Comments

Rating: 5.0

She Came Dancing

In the bangled rythms, shecame dancing
With the dancing bangles, she came with the rythmns.
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Benjamin Chiu Uy
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Susan Williams 16 September 2018

Oh, sorry. I forgot to mention the excellence of the title. I was scanning through the titles to pick a poem to read and this title reached out and took me by the hand! ! !

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Susan Williams 16 September 2018

The sexual allusions are sensual and in good taste but the poem goes deeper into the rhythms of life and that is what I want when I read poetry- -the layers of meanings and emotions.10+++++++++++++

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all came from this source and union perhaps man life and ultimate survival of the species comes this union ordain by god, there would be np progress, no creativity without this purpose thanks for the high marks

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