Thursday, March 7, 2013

She Came Back Today Comments

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She came back today
But wouldn't stay,
Made no demands
And nothing to say.
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Danny Draper
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Douglas Scotney 09 April 2013

Sympathetic, even curious. Not judgemental

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Captain Cur 17 March 2013

I agree with Kevin, this poem needs to be read carefully to fully gleam the meaning. A memory of a loved one imparts a nostalgic recollection of things past but never forgotten.

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Kevin Patrick 12 March 2013

This needs to be read multiple times in order to digest every word, but it is pretty haunting, and deeply personal, for me I think of everyone I have lost to death, who are gone but whose memories live on and seem to always return. I wont look at seeds again without thinking of someone lost.

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Valsa George 11 March 2013

She came, shrouded in mystery like the husk of a withered seed! You have created a haunting image! Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem! !

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Valerie Dohren 08 March 2013

Beautiful Danny - a little different from you, but very inspired and a delight to read.

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Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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