Tuesday, March 16, 2010

She Calls His Names In Whispers Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the town alone, he moves
he listens
his foot steps as quiet as rain drops
so beautiful but so pale
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samantha cassidy
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Mohamed Ayman 04 April 2010

well written samantha, keep it up :)

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Ena N. Mori 29 March 2010

'He hears it he hears his name in whispers, ' I like these lines. Keep on writing!

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Sreelekha Premjit 16 March 2010

I loved the feeling that the poem invoked in me. A nice write..Tnx.

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samantha cassidy

samantha cassidy

Geelong Victoria Australia
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