Friday, January 4, 2019

She Built A World Of Fantasy Comments

Rating: 5.0

She built a world of fantasy
on turrets and stone balconies
with ribbons in her golden hair
she danced in rainbows without care
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Kevin Patrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 January 2019

Children have a world of their own.They like to use their imagination and many play fantasy games where they pretend to be someone in a made- up world. A wonderful poem that captures the joys and wonders of childhood. Beautifully crafted with superb imagery.

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Susan Williams 28 January 2019

Imagination! So powerful in a child's world- -and even more so in a writer's world. We writers must live our stories as enthusiastically as children live theirs. 10

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Naila Rais 06 January 2019

So beautiful poem............. A child lives in their own fantastic world full of cheers and toys...... Naila

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