A sensuous breeze whispered in my ear
All the lovely things I wanted to hear
I wondered if this magic would disappear
Or was it because her presence was near
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This is a masterpiece, a poem 100%! So, nothing less than 10/10. 'I spotted a flower bending low As if it was trying to let me know' -A wonderful observation! 'Of this I know she brings me peace' -Beautiful! Sandra Feldman has said everything that I would say about this poem. The rhyming, tenderness, softness, peace&happiness, all simply superb! I can imagine your happy, peaceful, smiling face as you wrote this poem, and mine too glowed along with yours. This is a great success for a poet. Best wishes, my friend!
Your poem is lovely, soft and beautiful, full of tenderness, like a caress. Very inspired and inspiring.
Love the title. You words are soothing. thank you