Wednesday, May 9, 2012

She And He- One Day, Somewhere...(Part-I) Comments

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we have differences she said.
He-even twins have, , , roses and thorns too have
but since times unknown they have been lovers, , ,
She- there in our between a river exists that you cannot swim, , I won't try.
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Aman Saa
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Indira Babbellapati 12 May 2012

great technique and perfect wording that make a run-of-the-mill theme very unique! keep it up, young man!

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Shahzia Batool 11 May 2012

Innovative minds are expected to give their best...this poem is different n dramatic...He n She are the poetic device for the loud sharing of the poet's own thinking...Reprise is wonderful, , , ! ! !

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