That day, God sent her to me
Just for 30 minutes, it is momentary.
Young, charming and lovely
Sincere, shrew and brainy.
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Finally, fingers shake and grasp a pen. Ow! it becomes 'she, a romantic poem' I love these verses.Keep it up! ! ! !
hello, a sweet write of enthusiasm and infatuation... so full of the joys of youth... i wondered immediately the significance of 30 mins but i love conundrums and suggestive thoughts...im not sure but i think you wrote this and created her? through the write, so when we leave the poem she is no longer here (i hope you know what i mean) a slice of your imagination.... lovely clever and thought provoking...tyvm
ya... its quite long but it keeps its beauty throughout the poem....nice...: -) »so close«
Heart absorbs all feelings and suffers When much, they run over through eyes as tears.....wow Aung si ur the best keep it up
Yes..as u say..this is quite long..but is really worth to enjoy this coz this is an emotional great poem! !
A lovely poem and you crafting the words very nice, i like the teenage sounds in your poem, bold and vibrant..keep it up _Unwritten Soul
I like a lot this kind of poem. If it is a true, I also want to be but a moment.
This poem is really Romantic and lovely. A lovely thing from God. i like it.well done.
Feelings drip from the pen 'Ow! it becomes 'she, a romantic poem' original look at the love poem well done indeed...regards