Thursday, September 20, 2012

She, A Romantic Poem Comments

Rating: 4.8

That day, God sent her to me
Just for 30 minutes, it is momentary.
Young, charming and lovely
Sincere, shrew and brainy.
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aung si myanmar
COMMENTS
Ken E Hall 28 October 2012

Feelings drip from the pen 'Ow! it becomes 'she, a romantic poem' original look at the love poem well done indeed...regards

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Young Church Poetry 15 October 2012

Lovely poem with beautiful verses, brilliant work.

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Hla Thandarwai 10 October 2012

Finally, fingers shake and grasp a pen. Ow! it becomes 'she, a romantic poem' I love these verses.Keep it up! ! ! !

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Karen Sinclair 08 October 2012

hello, a sweet write of enthusiasm and infatuation... so full of the joys of youth... i wondered immediately the significance of 30 mins but i love conundrums and suggestive thoughts...im not sure but i think you wrote this and created her? through the write, so when we leave the poem she is no longer here (i hope you know what i mean) a slice of your imagination.... lovely clever and thought provoking...tyvm

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So Close 20 September 2012

ya... its quite long but it keeps its beauty throughout the poem....nice...: -) »so close«

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Sunny Rose 20 September 2012

Heart absorbs all feelings and suffers When much, they run over through eyes as tears.....wow Aung si ur the best keep it up

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Eindaray Kyaw 20 September 2012

Yes..as u say..this is quite long..but is really worth to enjoy this coz this is an emotional great poem! !

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Unwritten Soul 20 September 2012

A lovely poem and you crafting the words very nice, i like the teenage sounds in your poem, bold and vibrant..keep it up _Unwritten Soul

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Zero Ro 20 September 2012

I like a lot this kind of poem. If it is a true, I also want to be but a moment.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 20 September 2012

This poem is really Romantic and lovely. A lovely thing from God. i like it.well done.

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