Tuesday, August 1, 2006

She Comments

Rating: 4.0

She accompanies me wherever I go
She is my only fellow traveller
She sees, hears but never speaks
Why she is so silent?
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niranjan subhashsivan
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 08 November 2006

Subhash, The poem overall conveys a sense of longing and loneliness. I read it and think of a shadow constantly following one around in silence. On a more nitpicky note… I wonder of the use of ‘and often quite peace’. Did you mean quiet? If you didn’t perhaps consider it? … A lovely write. -Eila

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Mary Binu 04 November 2006

Your poems are really one of a kind! ! ! hope you enjoy writing the best... good luck, keep up the good work...

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Asma Bahrainwala 01 November 2006

hmm...this is an interesting riddle... each one can interpret it in his/her own way... nice write... Asma...

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Krishna Dasani 08 September 2006

the 'she' you have described here.. can be connected with many things.. good one..

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Angel Honeys 17 August 2006

I like your poem very much its lovely how you describe her =D

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Phumudzo Mapila 01 August 2006

Well she most definetly sounds like a great person.And its wonderful how you connect with that person within you.great poem.

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