Saturday, November 1, 2014

She Comments

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The first letter of she,
Stands for the soul of God
Yes it was Eve,
With a shy smile and a nascent nod,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Saheb Mohapatra 05 November 2014

i can clearly see the reflection of the actual worth of a woman.........in your poetic eyes...........great poem.......thanks.

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Heather Wilkins 02 November 2014

a beautiful poem a beautiful story ebjoyed

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Salini Nair 02 November 2014

fantastic write............beautiful poem...enjoyed

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Valsa George 02 November 2014

It is a matter of great delight that at least a few men see women as great! Usually men are very hesitant to admit that! Thanks Akhatarji! Enjoyed!

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 November 2014

When paradise was lost, Adam was shy, When Eve was lost, He trembled the sky. Beautiful Lines.

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