Monday, March 27, 2017

She Comments

Rating: 4.6

Beyond that pretty face
yes there's surely grace
but a powerful mind too!
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Rameeza Nasim
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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2021

Sadly enough for you, I am the Princess, but this is my zest to give yiou 5 Stars full on Top! An amazing poem for sure!

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Zulfiqar 17 April 2020

Wonderful words about girls......... She

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Meethi Mondal 21 January 2019

Fine poem........good thought... woman should be respected

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M Asim Nehal 14 December 2018

Superb poem. A poem that makes you think hard whether to accept or to surrender to the beauty. Thoughtful poem.10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 March 2018

Women should always be respected and treated with love and care! It's a brilliant poem! I liked the last stanza most! ...you got a choice/either be her master/or make her your Queen/and be the King! And rejoice! ...i see a sparkling literary future in you! Stay always blessed!

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Rameeza Nasim 01 May 2018

Thankyou for your appreciation sir :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2018

own her love her pamper her respect her and be a king...... ideals perfect of a woman....... thank you dear poetess. tony

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James Mclain 20 January 2018

It will be done as only you wish, A queen and your king loyal and true. Faithful and honest, Look up above at the sky that is blue.. James McLain

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Rameeza Nasim 22 January 2018

thank you sir.. yes

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 May 2017

Uniquely exposed the truth of oppressed heart. No slogan, no high-cry, no revolutionary threat yet too much touching the appeal. Easy, lucid and perhaps the poem of coming age. Congratulation!

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Rameeza Nasim 05 May 2017

thank you so much your compliment is the best I have on this poem :)

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Lovely lines that looms large with both balance and beauty! Congrats of your poem being selected as poem of the day. Keep on writing!

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Rameeza Nasim 05 May 2017

thanks a lot Simon

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Sandra Feldman 04 May 2017

Excellent poem bringing to surface the need for love and equilibrium in the intimate relationship between man and woman, where neither should dominate. Loving partners, that is. Beautifully written To be remembered....

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Rameeza Nasim 05 May 2017

thank you Sandra :)

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Ali Sufyan pasha 04 May 2017

Rameeza I pay tribute to ur poetry with these words that.. Look at sky stars shining just to say you that u are a moon of them

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Ali Sufyan pasha 04 May 2017

"She" You have ability in your words that u can express millions of words in very short lines.title name is also marvelous

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Rameeza Nasim 05 May 2017

thanks Ali Sufiyan for your kind words :)

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Lantz Pierre 04 May 2017

Who is she? All women? Because I know that people of both genders come in examples of specificity that contradict all generalities. It's just not possible to paint all people, or all members of one gender, with a single brush. Our reality is more complicated than that. Make your poem specific to one particular person and I have no problem with it. Leave it terms of the generic gender term she and I interpret that as speaking for individuals that fall beyond the realm of what you may intend.

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Rameeza Nasim 05 May 2017

Well the poem was about She! the womenfolk what is her need and desires

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Rajnish Manga 04 May 2017

A very legitimate demand of today's woman in the male dominated Asian societies. Thanks. Besides love and care she need her respect share.... and little space

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Rameeza Nasim 04 May 2017

thanks a lot sir

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you got a choice either be her master or make her your Queen and be the King! and rejoice! A bold and beautiful poem! Congratulations Rameeza!

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Rameeza Nasim 04 May 2017

Thankyou Geeta :)

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Akhtar Jawad 04 May 2017

Congrats for this lovely poem being selected as members poem of the day.

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Rameeza Nasim 04 May 2017

thankyou so much sir

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Clarence Prince 04 May 2017

...own her love her And make your Queen... I like that!

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Rameeza Nasim 04 May 2017

Thankyou Prince :)

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Rini Shibu 04 May 2017

Wow well written, women need respect besides love and care

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Rameeza Nasim 04 May 2017

thank you Rini :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 May 2017

Besides love and care she need her respect share and little space..... love these lines, great imaginary. Thanks and congratulation for the poem of the day.

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Rameeza Nasim 04 May 2017

thank you for the kind words sir

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Nosheen Irfan 04 May 2017

A lovely poem, celebrating womanhood. It captures the essence of femininity well. Congrats.

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Rameeza Nasim 04 May 2017

Thankyou Nosheen :)

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