Beyond that pretty face
yes there's surely grace
but a powerful mind too!
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Superb poem. A poem that makes you think hard whether to accept or to surrender to the beauty. Thoughtful poem.10+++
Women should always be respected and treated with love and care! It's a brilliant poem! I liked the last stanza most! ...you got a choice/either be her master/or make her your Queen/and be the King! And rejoice! ...i see a sparkling literary future in you! Stay always blessed!
own her love her pamper her respect her and be a king...... ideals perfect of a woman....... thank you dear poetess. tony
It will be done as only you wish, A queen and your king loyal and true. Faithful and honest, Look up above at the sky that is blue.. James McLain
Uniquely exposed the truth of oppressed heart. No slogan, no high-cry, no revolutionary threat yet too much touching the appeal. Easy, lucid and perhaps the poem of coming age. Congratulation!
Lovely lines that looms large with both balance and beauty! Congrats of your poem being selected as poem of the day. Keep on writing!
Excellent poem bringing to surface the need for love and equilibrium in the intimate relationship between man and woman, where neither should dominate. Loving partners, that is. Beautifully written To be remembered....
Rameeza I pay tribute to ur poetry with these words that.. Look at sky stars shining just to say you that u are a moon of them
"She" You have ability in your words that u can express millions of words in very short lines.title name is also marvelous
Who is she? All women? Because I know that people of both genders come in examples of specificity that contradict all generalities. It's just not possible to paint all people, or all members of one gender, with a single brush. Our reality is more complicated than that. Make your poem specific to one particular person and I have no problem with it. Leave it terms of the generic gender term she and I interpret that as speaking for individuals that fall beyond the realm of what you may intend.
Well the poem was about She! the womenfolk what is her need and desires
A very legitimate demand of today's woman in the male dominated Asian societies. Thanks. Besides love and care she need her respect share.... and little space
you got a choice either be her master or make her your Queen and be the King! and rejoice! A bold and beautiful poem! Congratulations Rameeza!
Congrats for this lovely poem being selected as members poem of the day.
Besides love and care she need her respect share and little space..... love these lines, great imaginary. Thanks and congratulation for the poem of the day.
A lovely poem, celebrating womanhood. It captures the essence of femininity well. Congrats.
Sadly enough for you, I am the Princess, but this is my zest to give yiou 5 Stars full on Top! An amazing poem for sure!