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Heartfelt poem, your poems are straight from heart and it reaches heart....Superb 5 *

I also name kezia

An amazing write that touches the hearts of the readers.

A touching poem, I recollect Lakdi jal koyela bhai koyela jal bhai rakh, MaiN dukhiya aysi jali koyela bhai nah rakh.

May be it reflects the condition of a particular woman or women in general. It is emphatic enough to draw attention of the reader to the plight of the protagonist. There is pain and sadness and a bleeding heart finding expression through the poem. Thanks a lot for sharing.

no light and heat, but losing being. good one