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She
She knows
Where to stamp her feet
But struggles to reach the spot…
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She- is always She.As if she is unable to stand as 'I'! This happens in almost everywhere.This is a peculiar pain not being realised by many.This is so beautifully woven.10.
you have narrated the struggle and oppression faced by women in the present society in your lively and touchy lines....full 10 marks to you......
Sorry Mr. Das. Could view your reactions today. Because of office exigencies I couldn't visit the page regularly. Thank you so much...I highly appreciated your review. Further tips for improvement is eagerly awaited.
Great poem! Why must she beg for that which is rightfully hers? This seems to be the first poem that you have posted on this site, so welcome to Poem Hunter!
I would also like to add that the poem also reveal the hypocrisy and double standards of our society which have been shaped through hundreds of years of their history. Thanks.
Amazing poem. Looks like a meticulous study of a woman's status in our society and the turmoils she is subjected to. Thank you, Sanjukta, and welcome to this Forum. She is clear / Of her aspirations / But more often / Denied of bare minimum Why there is a gap / Between the cup and the sip?
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7/25/2025 6:00:20 AM # 1.0.0
But … Why there is a gap.. Between the cup and the sip? Why the talks ca'nt walk? Why she begs for those, By default to be her own…? ? ? Why she shouts, screams Fights and bleeds every now and then For the encroached entitlements Of her own…..? ? ? ? - - - A wonderful poem about woman's position in society.