Sunday, December 4, 2016

She Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tears rolls out and dries
Sweat falls out and dies
As she tries and tries and tries
To give her mom a surprise
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subu pramanik
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Suby Pramanik 05 December 2016

Thanks u guys

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Siddartha Montik 05 December 2016

very nice expression of that tender feelings..that are delicate! thanks for sharing.

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The Preacher 05 December 2016

Great Thought, loved it! :)

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Kim Barney 04 December 2016

Her mom thinks she's nothing nice Still she tries and tries and tries Too bad some moms don't appreciate their own children. Well written. Welcome to Poem hunter!

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