Tuesday, September 1, 2015

She Comments

Rating: 4.8

She is born with a silver spoon,
The sky enlightened with the glittering moon,
The sun and the stars are all happy,
To see an angel in a soft coccon.
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Abhay Shah
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Chinedu Dike 09 September 2015

A beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. The essence of love between man and wife well depicted in the poem. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing Abhay. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

Wonderfully written, Abhay. Though both men and women have vital roles in life and society, women are still discriminated against on many levels. As a father of four daughters, poems like this touch my heart. Thanks

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Abhay Shah 02 September 2015

Thank You!

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Roseann Shawiak 02 September 2015

This is such a beautiful and perfect explanation of how much the world needs a women! A woman does have dreams, yet she puts them on hold to marry and have a family. Not many men ever think about what a woman wants in life, they just assume that she wants to marry and have children. A mother is supportive of her husband and children's dreams, encouraging, giving them hope, helping them in any way possible. What exactly do they do for her to help her attain her dreams? A very thought provoking poem Abhay! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Abhay Shah 02 September 2015

Thank you so much!

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Aidan Dubois 02 September 2015

Wonderful, you are a talented poet.

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Abhay Shah 02 September 2015

Thanks a lot!

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Soul Watcher 02 September 2015

He without She is nothing. She without He is nothing as well, nice poem, this is the nature of us as humans. Thanks for sharing

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Abhay Shah 02 September 2015

Thanks a lot for your kind words!

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