Monday, November 18, 2013

She Comments

Rating: 3.3

She stands there in the rain with a sad look on her face.
She was once full of joy and life but that's all gone now.
She now believes as if people look right through her.
She closes her eyes and begins to dream about flying.
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Gary Hembree
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Kay Staley 10 September 2015

For those reading this poem I would also read He by Gary Hembree. It seems to go along with this one. Maybe this was the girl that got away. And maybe she saw the he from the other poem, and that made her lose her 'life' in such complete peace and serenity.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 21 December 2013

the emotion of this poem alive the word tell her sadness perfectly love this one so much though it a sad poem

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Noreen Carden 03 December 2013

A sad poem beautifully written

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Khairul Ahsan 19 November 2013

A sad remembrance! A nice poem.

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