Thursday, January 12, 2006

She Comments

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I scraped my knees and hands raw
Crawling, begging, pleading for her to come back
I tore at her coat and at her dress
And watched taffeta floating in the air
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Amanda Thomas
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Augustin Sebastian 21 January 2006

placing yorself alternatiely in He and She. the process goes like a wave. i couldnt avoid taking these two poems(He and She) together to say some thinng on it. Nice....

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