Wednesday, August 8, 2012

She Comments

Rating: 5.0

The streets were getting wet
As she walked through the dark stinking alleys
During the midnight hours,
Feeling the soft drizzles..
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Indranil Bhaduri
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Rumi Roy 12 September 2012

What a poem! ! What amazing portrayal..mindblowing composition.! ! !

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Prasanna Kumari 03 September 2012

your words portrays the real emotion of helplessness and pain in life.....as she walks pain also walks with her and enters deep into our mind with her

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Rakshanya Sekar 10 August 2012

Amazing! Beautifully composed...!

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Sunil Babu 09 August 2012

i tasted bliss in those wanton hours of pure abandon. your lines remind me above quoted lines of kamala surayya. poem is very nice..keep writing and posting.

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Ruby Honeytip 08 August 2012

Indranil! This is just lovely.....like a little sparkle of magic: -)

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Bob Brown 08 August 2012

Fantastic.Speechless!

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Leslie Philibert 08 August 2012

Good write, with a extended metaphor of poetic quality.

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Indranil Bhaduri

Indranil Bhaduri

Kolkata, India
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