The streets were getting wet
As she walked through the dark stinking alleys
During the midnight hours,
Feeling the soft drizzles..
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your words portrays the real emotion of helplessness and pain in life.....as she walks pain also walks with her and enters deep into our mind with her
i tasted bliss in those wanton hours of pure abandon. your lines remind me above quoted lines of kamala surayya. poem is very nice..keep writing and posting.
Indranil! This is just lovely.....like a little sparkle of magic: -)
What a poem! ! What amazing portrayal..mindblowing composition.! ! !