Sunday, December 11, 2011

She Comments

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she always works hard, though it's never enough
She always tries, though sometimes it's too much.
She does her best, she does herself proud,
But she can't see it, she puts herself down.
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lindsey ashton
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AJ Ryan 12 December 2011

Very well-written poem, you have talent in poetry

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