Saturday, February 16, 2013

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She feels so lost and so unclean
Nothing makes it go away
Guilt, shame, hopelessness
They don't understand her
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Joshua Fegley
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Tanya Engel 21 February 2013

ONE CAN’T HELP BUT FEEL HER PAIN … IMAGERY PORTRAYED BEAUTIFULLY THROUGH CHOICE OF WORDS … DEEP POETRY AND IT HIT HARD AT THE HEART. LOVELY.

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Rikki Lawson 16 February 2013

Oddly astute female persona! ! I like it. Thank you for your comments by the way.

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