Monday, November 22, 2004

She Comments

Rating: 4.4

....and when you asked me to lie back
I didn't have a clue, of course...
I thought we'd paused along the track
to rest our bones,
...
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Fay Slimm 11 January 2009

A precise and yet divine narrative of such intimacy that it takes the reader into the event and all through the procedings - - and out at the far end of the scene we are as sated as the writer is......... that is the effect of any good poetry - - so top marks for this walk into a very private paradise........... from Fay.

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Emancipation Planz 11 July 2008

so long... interlude and intercourse... euphemisms.. you in femisms... she... sheer silk fantarsy... PS.. no moss in sight? alas tis sad.. no foreign delight

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Gina Onyemaechi 10 August 2006

Just what I needed today (and all week, come to think of it) : an emotional lift. To you, Herbert.

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Gina Onyemaechi 13 March 2006

And after all that heavy petting, what did you do, H? : -) Sensual and romantic writing. I like this side of you. Warm regards, Gina.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 25 August 2005

mmmm......I don't think I can say more.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 November 2004

Riddles you give me, must look up Johann's original. Tea won't do it for me, coffee, due to its heavy content of methyl xanthines (remember methyl donors) is the ideal lytic agent to re-establish balance of homeostasis.

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Lenchen Elf 22 November 2004

A Plan the Muses entertain'd Methodically to impart To Psyche the poetic art; Prosaic-pure her soul remain'd. No wondrous sounds escaped her lyre E'en in the fairest Summer night; But Amor came with glance of fire, - The lesson soon was learn'd aright. Johann Wolfgang von Goethe Phew, I need a strong cup of tea after reading that H, goodness gracious! !

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