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Tears
She cries a silent moan into the night
For the deserved resting seems never come
Opened eyes to see… just same sight
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nice simile: ''She Is just scared like a child Just lost on troubled thoughts '' well embedded into this sad lyric poem, nice portrait, thank you for sharing.........10+++++
If my kisses can’t lift you up I’m sorry for you: love of my life.... if my love can't u lift up..... all words beautifully said..... very good write read mine 'Cry not' in this regard
'If my kisses can’t lift you up I’m sorry for you: love of my life.' a fitting finale to your 'she' -10 anjali
A very good theme and very well expressed. I agree with Greenwolfe.
beautiful understanding and the deep care and concern in ur words shows deep love for ur love of ur life! ! ! .
The understanding and meaning here was easy enough to follow. The problem is a common one. A little girl lost in herself. Loved, but not able to see anything but the misery that surrounds her. Very well presented by the writer. GW62
Very beautiful and loving. Last lines uplifts the poem.10 from me, allan. Best Wishes Naseer
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'She Is beautiful. On that there’s no doubt She’s great but at time she’s blind And I' Rachel Ann Butler