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Beyond the distant shores of seven seas,
Her sparkling smiles still in my memory,
I hear her whisper in the morning breeze,
Like melodious tunes of whispering bee;
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This poem itself show how much you love ur wife she s very lucky to have you in her life keep writing for your sweet wife kudos 10
This beautiful poem echoed so many of my poems, viz. WE ARE NEARING SHORE, WE'LL MEET etc. The structure is so good, words wonderfulllllllll.10
wow I feel yur presence in the garden of jasmines--is this really for me tooooooooo! ! ! ! ! ! +10 regards anjali (read mine ANSWER-WHY DO U LOVE ME)
wow....i was reading it with my breath held..........it is beautiful......10! ! (is it really for me?)
its a good start....and youll improve ill advise you to read some classical poets like keats and wordsworth...otherwise a nice effort
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8/1/2025 10:39:22 PM # 1.0.0
a sweet n lyrical tribute....