She Comments

Excellent! Well penned Nice portrait. enjoyed 10+

excellent extended metaphor she...the princess of your day the love of your life the breath that you take the rainbow of your hope... nice portrait, very well written poem 10/10

Indeed it’s a Great indeed...s[he] embosoms the he LOL! But he forgets she sometime… Ms Nivedita UK

i thing the poem addresses man. then it is perfectly right. shan

hmmm, this made me think of a woman.. well lets hope this woman you wrote about keeps shining like the sun